Creatine buyers ask: is it right for me, is it tested, and how long will it last? This page answers all three before the button.
Concept · unofficial · not affiliated with or endorsed by Thorne.
Measured on a 390 px phone, from the top of the page. The first phone screen ends at 844 px.
The After is the live concept: tap around. No working checkout.
It takes the top of the screen.
No answers in the first screen.
Sizes at 1,208 px, button at 1,702 px.
Thorne’s own batch steps. Tap through them.
One row of chips. Answers in Thorne’s words.
About 3 months, $0.44 a scoop.
Delivery matches one tub. Sticky button below.
The proof still comes first.
Serving, size, price, delivery, tested.
Pick without hunting.
4 changes. Everything else on their page stays.
Before buying creatine, people ask: is it right for me?
Put the answers under the rating, one chip per question.
Thorne’s own words. One tap each.
“NSF Certified for Sport®” at the end of a paragraph is easy to miss.
Make the 5 batch checks the first image.
Proof you can see beats proof you have to find.
Every tub buyer asks: how long will this last?
Show it on each size: about 3 months, $0.44 a scoop.
Answered before they ask.
One scoop a day, 90 scoops: a tub lasts 3 months.
Default delivery to every 3 months, not monthly.
No pile-up of tubs in the cupboard.
A/B test against their current page: the fit chips, batch ticket and supply readout vs today.
Add-to-cart rate
Subscription take rate · share on every 3 months · skips and cancels at 90 days
Kept as is: the title, rating, price line, Thorne's subscription perks and 20% tier, quantity + Add to Cart, the HSA/FSA line, warnings, and everything below the section.
Other structures we explored: Spec sheet · Step builder · the full concept, phone + desktop
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